I thought the movie was good
I agree that it would have been fun for you to make, but sometimes being random isn't everything. You'll find that random pieces that make it big secretly do have an underlying line of control that's not really apparent to the eye. I like the story, the vibes, I even thought that the weird art added to the strong emotion you tried to bring out. The animations could have had a lil more detail, a lil more substance. I mean there really wasn't any animation, it was just frames... drawn over and over again... you get the FBF look, but there really was NO ANIMATION. I'd like to see some of that in your work, even if its simple, just a slight bit of it at certain parts of the movie could seriously emphasize your talent.
The music was well and good. The looping sound of the photomachine got annoying after a while, cuz it wasn't in sync with the flipping of the photos, it was just... looping...
Overall I think it was a good story, and you had a great project but didn't really think before you did. Some brainstorming would have brought this baby a long way! Cheers and waiting to see your next one!
To the guy below me.... FU*^&KIN G#Y is two works...